jueves, 14 de enero de 2010

A letter to a franchiser.

Dear Sirs,

My name is Arantxa Remigia Sarrión I am a 24 year old economist, I graduated in the university of Cambridge one year ago and since then I am employed at an international company.

During I was in the University I could see that I wanted to associate in your franchise of nourishment, "Gama", modern supermarkets of average size, supermarkets of proximity for a comfortable and complete purchase.

I am interested in working in this business, but I need that you give me some information about your business situation:
- I would like to know how many shops are arround the world.
- What is the amount required in the initial investment.
-And what kind of benefit have your franchise at the end of the month.

I wait for your answers, thanks for your attention.

Yours faithfully,
Arantxa Remigia Sarrión.

1 comentario:

  1. In my opinion, I think that your composition is good but I would change some things and you have some grammatical mistakes.

    I think that your questions are few and the franchiser may be will get you wrong and thinks that youhandle well in that type of business when you doesn´t have any previous experiences.

    Apart from that and from your gramaticals mistakes, I don´t see any others mistakes.

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